loopy_loo_17 said...

I liked the camera shots and angles u used, was very creative. but the camera was a bit shaky, so if u made it more steady it would have looked more proffesional. I like the title, it sounds interesting n makes me want to watch the film. The sound was a bit jumpy so it would have been better if u had lowered the noise in parts u dont need and added a quiet soundtrack in the background which creates tension n suspension.

I enjoyed it though, the boys were funny! Well Done :D x

I was quite pleased with my finale product i believe that my strongest point were my editing and the shots that i have used to slowly bring a story together. If i were to do this project again i would make shore that there was more dialoge and so making the story line better and making it easyer for people to follow. i may put in music but i think the natural sounds of the gravil crunching build up tension and the TV in the house a good background noise which keeps people wondering.

The preliminary exercise helped me to get to grips with the type of shots that i could use and the working of the camera. In my preliminary task i did make error with the amount of camera shots that i used and the editing was not always in sink.

Using technology

The editing soft ware that i used enabaled me to link different shots together and create a better story. the technology that obstructed me was the soft ware which was hard to understand and meant i had less time to film because of the time it took to learn how all the applications worked.

Audience

My target audience is a young male audience who likes a thriller an a bit of violence in there film this may be at that expense of the storyline. the target audience is a big one and the people in this group are the most likely to go out and watch a film. I think my research into films changed my pre-production process as in quite alot of films similar to mine there is not alot of dialoge and the action has a large role in telling the story.
In the filming and editing the meaning of the film is made apparent with the the props used and the dialoge that is in the film. Creative decisions that i have made that were influenced because of the audience which i am targeting are the added comedy and the fight scene that is in there.
The target audience responded positivly to the trialled aspect that i showed them. I don't believe that interpretations of my film will vary on the cultural situation of the viewer.

i liked the incredible shots u used aswell as the degree in which u edited the film... truly a speilberg level of filmiing... however the sotry line was very vauge as he went into an unknown house to have a shower and change bk into wt he was previously wearing.. strange idea if u ask me but somehow, i think it works... From harry ratcliff

Mikel :) said...
hahha i love those guys :) tom's so weird

nice contrast of different shots to give the effect you were going for. lots of different angles and fairly easy to understand storyline.

Though maybe i think the lighting could be improoved, it may have been the camera or just the time of day of which you filmed, it does not effect the film that much.

enjoyed watching lukey :) nice son