loopy_loo_17 said...

I liked the camera shots and angles u used, was very creative. but the camera was a bit shaky, so if u made it more steady it would have looked more proffesional. I like the title, it sounds interesting n makes me want to watch the film. The sound was a bit jumpy so it would have been better if u had lowered the noise in parts u dont need and added a quiet soundtrack in the background which creates tension n suspension.

I enjoyed it though, the boys were funny! Well Done :D x

I was quite pleased with my finale product i believe that my strongest point were my editing and the shots that i have used to slowly bring a story together. If i were to do this project again i would make shore that there was more dialoge and so making the story line better and making it easyer for people to follow. i may put in music but i think the natural sounds of the gravil crunching build up tension and the TV in the house a good background noise which keeps people wondering.

The preliminary exercise helped me to get to grips with the type of shots that i could use and the working of the camera. In my preliminary task i did make error with the amount of camera shots that i used and the editing was not always in sink.

Using technology

The editing soft ware that i used enabaled me to link different shots together and create a better story. the technology that obstructed me was the soft ware which was hard to understand and meant i had less time to film because of the time it took to learn how all the applications worked.

Audience

My target audience is a young male audience who likes a thriller an a bit of violence in there film this may be at that expense of the storyline. the target audience is a big one and the people in this group are the most likely to go out and watch a film. I think my research into films changed my pre-production process as in quite alot of films similar to mine there is not alot of dialoge and the action has a large role in telling the story.
In the filming and editing the meaning of the film is made apparent with the the props used and the dialoge that is in the film. Creative decisions that i have made that were influenced because of the audience which i am targeting are the added comedy and the fight scene that is in there.
The target audience responded positivly to the trialled aspect that i showed them. I don't believe that interpretations of my film will vary on the cultural situation of the viewer.

i liked the incredible shots u used aswell as the degree in which u edited the film... truly a speilberg level of filmiing... however the sotry line was very vauge as he went into an unknown house to have a shower and change bk into wt he was previously wearing.. strange idea if u ask me but somehow, i think it works... From harry ratcliff

Mikel :) said...
hahha i love those guys :) tom's so weird

nice contrast of different shots to give the effect you were going for. lots of different angles and fairly easy to understand storyline.

Though maybe i think the lighting could be improoved, it may have been the camera or just the time of day of which you filmed, it does not effect the film that much.

enjoyed watching lukey :) nice son

Boyzie said...
Nice KD nice, i thought the storyline wasa bit... weird and it dosent really make sense. Other than that i thought the editing was good and the camera shots used made me feel like i was in the cinema! :D

Emily Harries said...
Well done lukey:D
That was really well edited all the different shots that were used worked really well together:) Its different and makes you want to know what else has happened in the story and what else is going to happen.

reprsentations

the people that i am trying to represent are the new type of gang members that live in brtian today they are people who are not scared to kill or carry a gun. i have achieved this by the mise-en-scene that i have used and the people who play the charaters. The place that i have set my film is a normal house that is off a main road somewhere this type of activity might happen.The time period for my peace is now as the clouths and the house with all todays things in.

in the filming of the clip i follwed the rules of makeing a film and managed to get alot of interesting shots and when edited works well to create tension and keeps the audience intersted.
The film that i have made conforms to the genre as it is a thriller and has the characterists of one it has tension and a fight scene which shows that it lives up to the audiences expectations. i think that the film challenges the conventions of the genre with the comedy that is in the film.
the type of audience that i am trying to please in this film is a young male viewer as it fulfills there expectations of violence and humour that many big film producers use to capture the same audience.

introduction

my main film is called killer runner and it is about a man on the run from a rival gang member and how he comes to an end. ideas came from the bourne films and peaces of music i had listerned to. There are two main characters one has got part of his revenge on his rivals sister. there is also a third character who owns the house and takes matters into his own hands.